This afternoon là gì
Q:I spent all afternoon on the roof with a homemade catapult blasting joggers with buckets of mashed potatoes. có nghĩa là gì? Q:Enjoy a Japanese "take on" quaint afternoon tea foods with this cake. có nghĩa là gì? Q: he should spent the afternoon ther with her before SNEAKING OFF to a nearby hotel for the night có nghĩa là gì? Q:Hãy chỉ cho tôi những câu ví dụ với
"what can I bring for you on this glorious afternoon? " is this sentence grammatically incorrect? we can't use "on" before this afternoon, can we? I heard this sentence in a movie. . Q:Hãy chỉ cho tôi những câu ví dụ với shortlyafter __ o'clock in the afternoon. Q:Hãy chỉ cho tôi những câu ví dụ với are you free this afternoon can I come to see you. Q:Đâu
là sự khác biệt giữa afternoon và afternoons ? Q:Đâu là sự khác biệt giữa In the afternoon và At the afternoon và Which is correct? ? Q:Nói câu này trong Tiếng Anh (Mỹ) như thế nào? good afternoon, the item was delivered to your place. if you have any questions about items or assembling or whatever, please let me know Q:Nói câu này trong Tiếng Anh
(Anh) như thế nào? This afternoon I'll relax a little, then I'll go to the library to give some books back and to borrow new ones. After that I'll go to the dance school to pole dance. Q:Nói câu này trong Tiếng Anh (Mỹ) như thế nào? "at the afternoon the sun very hot" Q: The afternoon was cold and snowy. Suddenly there was a knock on the door. "The picnic is scheduled for tomorrow afternoon." or "There were many afternoons where we did not eat pizza." :) A:afternoon is from 1pm to 5pm *** When Asuka opened the door, she was greeted with the sight of a man clad in a black suit and hat. Are you Asuka? he said. Y Yes she said guardedly. "Here is an invitation to our magic school. Get ready to come with me right now." She packed her things in haste. Telling her mother that she was headed to the convenience store, she left her home. He didn't answer any of her questions. After a few minutes walk, they reached a small house. "Go into this house, he said. It leads to our school. The president is waiting for you." Overwhelming curiosity to uncover the truth behind his intentions drowned her fear and apprehension. She entered the house, and walked straight forward, the darkness inside swallowing her. She had a feeling that something of unprecedented significance was about to happen, but she couldn't put her finger on it. *** A few tips I want to mention are that you should use more concrete language rather than abstract most of the time. For example, I have no idea what a "weird" hat is. Use a word that makes an image form in the reader's head. I'd use something like "a hat that looked like it came straight out of a 19th century history book". Wordier, but more concrete. Another thing is show instead of telling. Don't tell us Asuka said yes, show her doing it. In my creative writing class, we did an assignment (we had to write a short story) before the Christmas break. I got a 98% on my story. One of the reasons I tend to do better than everyone else in English and writing classes is I focusing on "showing" the action. This is probably the best piece of advice I can give. Lastly, I'd recommend going for more believable interactions between characters. If someone tells your character that she's enrolled in a magic school, her reaction shouldn't be so nonchalant. Other than that, your story was good. It was natural. It's probably even better than what a lot of people in my writing class submit, and they're all native speakers. That's my personal opinion, I guess. I don't say I'm definitely right about everything, but I do think I am lol A:No problem! :) Both "I spent" and "I passed" are correct grammatically, but for me, "I spent the afternoon ~ing..." sounds more natural than "I passed the afternoon ~ing." I usually only use "pass" with "passed the time" - "When I was at the doctor's office, I passed the time reading the magazines," etc. With other measures of time, I generally use "spent" ("I spent the day reading," "I spent the afternoon reading," "I spent two weeks on Jeju Island," etc. A:You can add It was getting really hot since -this- afternoon. But that fine too :) A:I can meet with you anytime this afternoon. Please let me know what time works for you. |